Good and Evil

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Alright so I'm currently working on this "writing"/idea and I'm not sure about it, I like where its going but I'd like to hear what you all think.

Leandro opened his eyes slowly, how was this possible?  He could have sworn.  The car was traveling so fast, he didn’t he have time to react, just a flash of light and pain.  So much pain.   He lifted his hand slowly; shaking tremendously, there was no way he was alive…  But how could you explain this any other way?  The world he saw before him was the same he left, besides the fact that grey, everything.  The trees, the sky, the paramedics taking care of the still living victim of the tragic accident, the helicopter in the distant.  Leandro walked over to one of the paramedics and cautiously touched him, his hand passed right through him, he didn’t even flinch.  Leandro pulled his hand back, biting his lips he looked about, there was no doubt that he was dead, but this wasn’t… it wasn’t what he thought it would be.  Where was the bright light?  The angels, anyone?  His looked about, he was the only vibrant color in the sea of grey.  A chill ran down his spine and coursed throughout his body, he was alone.

            Leandro looked toward the horizon, the sun was just beginning to set, what he would have given to see one more sunset.  He turned around to see shadows, creeping towards him, consuming everything in their inky blackness.  Panic gripped him as it swiftly approached, he wanted to run, to flee, to get as far away as possible; but his legs stood frozen in place to afraid to even move.



*This is all I have so far, but hey if you all like, I'll keep posting what I write.*
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